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		<title>Misplaced modifiers and dangling participles</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Nov 2012 13:13:42 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Ivy Wigmore</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#160; Which is correct? a. As a quick and easy way to share content, I recommend Dropbox. b. I recommend Dropbox as a quick and easy way to share content. Answer: b. Explanation: What&#8217;s wrong with the first sentence? Why, it&#8217;s our old friend, the misplaced modifier. Structurally, &#8220;as a quick and easy way to [...]]]></description>
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<p><strong>Which is correct?</strong><br />
a. As a quick and easy way to share content, I recommend Dropbox.<br />
b. I recommend <a href="http://searchconsumerization.techtarget.com/definition/Dropbox">Dropbox</a> as a quick and easy way to share content.</p>
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<strong>Answer: b.</strong></p>
<p><strong>Explanation:</strong></p>
<p>What&#8217;s wrong with the first sentence? Why, it&#8217;s our old friend, the misplaced modifier. Structurally, &#8220;as a quick and easy way to share content&#8221; modifies the noun or pronoun that immediately follows it. So that means that I am a quick and easy way to share content &#8212; and I am not.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s another example, from <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Elements_of_Style">Strunk and White</a>:</p>
<p>&#8220;Being in a dilapidated condition, I was able to buy the house very cheap.&#8221;</p>
<p>Although I may be in a somewhat dilapidated condition, that sentence would only be correct if the sellers took pity on me because of my sad state and gave me a steep discount. It&#8217;s more likely that &#8220;dilapidated condition&#8221; is intended to describe the house.</p>
<p>I like this one from the Bangor Daily News, 20 Jan 1978, too: </p>
<p>&#8220;After years of being lost under a pile of dust, Walter P. Stanley, III, left, found all the old records of the Bangor Lions Club.&#8221;</p>
<p>Good man, Walter P. Stanley, III! Most people would have given up after even a few months lost under a pile of dust. </p>
<p>On <a href="http://www.copyblogger.com/5-common-mistakes-that-make-you-look-dumb/">Copyblogger</a>, Brian Clark shares two vivid examples from Tom Sant’s book <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Persuasive-Business-Proposals-Customers-Contracts/dp/0814471536/">Persuasive Business Proposals</a>:</p>
<p>&#8220;After rotting in the cellar for weeks, my brother brought up some oranges.&#8221;<br />
<em> Uhh… keep your decomposing brother away from me!</em></p>
<p><em></em>&#8220;Featuring plug-in circuit boards, we can strongly endorse this server’s flexibility and growth potential.&#8221;<br />
<em> Hmmm… robotic copy written by people embedded with circuit boards. Makes sense.</em></p>
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		<title>Don&#8217;t leave your modifiers hanging</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 08 May 2012 14:02:48 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Ivy Wigmore</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Business writing]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[CIO]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[common grammar errors]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[dangling modifiers]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[What&#8217;s wrong with this sentence? &#8220;As a prominent cloud storage provider, security is crucial.&#8221; Ah, the dangling modifier. It starts out so purposeful but gets left hanging in the breeze. &#8220;As a prominent cloud storage provider&#8221; is intended to modify something. In this case, it should be a company that provides cloud storage. The sentence [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>What&#8217;s wrong with this sentence?</strong></p>
<p>&#8220;As a prominent <a href="http://searchcloudstorage.techtarget.com/definition/cloud-storage-providers">cloud storage provider</a>, security is crucial.&#8221;</p>
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<strong>Ah, the dangling modifier. </strong></p>
<p>It starts out so purposeful but gets left hanging in the breeze.</p>
<p>&#8220;As a prominent cloud storage provider&#8221; is intended to modify something. In this case, it should be a company that provides <a href="http://searchcloudstorage.techtarget.com/definition/cloud-storage">cloud storage</a>.</p>
<p>The sentence should go something like:</p>
<p>&#8220;As a prominent cloud storage provider, we know that security is crucial.&#8221; (Possibly as a lead in to a PR message in the wake of a <a href="http://searchsecurity.techtarget.com/definition/data-breach">data breach</a>, but let&#8217;s not get sidetracked.)  Really, if your company can&#8217;t even properly identify the business in a sentence, should customers trust you with their data?</p>
<p>The dangling modifier is related to the misplaced modifier, in which case the modifier and the thing it modifies are both present but not properly arranged. (<a href="https://twitter.com/#%21/grammargirl">@GrammarGirl</a> Mignon Fogarty explains <a href="http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/misplaced-modifiers.aspx">misplaced and dangling modifiers</a> at greater length.)</p>
<p>Misplaced modifiers are one of my favorite types of errors, because they lead to fun sentences like &#8220;<a href="http://itknowledgeexchange.techtarget.com/writing-for-business/writing-for-business-modifier-placement-2/">The code needs to be rewritten badly.</a>&#8221;</p>
<p>Funny, right? I still crack up remembering my grade five teacher explaining misplaced modifiers with the sentence &#8220;I went out to chase the dog wearing my pajamas.&#8221;</p>
<p>See, grammar can be fun!</p>
<p>Follow me on Twitter <a href="https://twitter.com/#!/tao_of_grammar">@tao_of_grammar</a></p>
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