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Jun 23 2009   2:10PM GMT

Clarity of reference

Ivy Wigmore Ivy Wigmore Profile: Ivy Wigmore

typing Which is correct?
Insourcing offers some advantages over outsourcing for SMBs but _________ may not be fully explored.
a. those advantages
b. they

Answer: a.

Explanation: For clarity, you need to specify what may not be fully explored. Otherwise, the reader could think the reference was to SMBs.

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