January 22, 2009 1:48 AM
Posted by: Margaret Rouse
commas,
introductory phrases,
misplaced modifiersWhat's wrong with this sentence?
Once infected, the worm turns off Windows Update services, thereby preventing the machine from obtaining the very patch that would have prevented the initial exploit.
January 19, 2009 6:42 PM
Posted by: Margaret Rouse
commas,
compound predicatesThe new and improved Storage-as-a-Service (SaaS) offerings _________________ getting a lot of attention.
a. look a lot different than they used to, and are
b. look a lot different than they used to and are